tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.comments2012-02-28T10:41:43.265-06:00Erik Smetanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18055198588873817320noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-45782811119094981222012-02-28T10:41:43.265-06:002012-02-28T10:41:43.265-06:00Excited to see you all there! -IlanIlan Mocharihttp://www.zinskytheobscure.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-86822330600934807622012-02-22T11:07:29.523-06:002012-02-22T11:07:29.523-06:00Hear, hear! Well said, my dear.I think you&#39;ve described writing fiction clearly and concisely.<br /><br />BarrettDorisRose MacBeanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02667077044993845200noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-84038265968575914732012-02-02T23:10:57.077-06:002012-02-02T23:10:57.077-06:00In this bleak and beautiful essay, Goolsby astutely captures the timeless menace and yearning of young men forever separated by distance and opportunity. Goolsby seamlessly unites these characters in their implicit desire of what neither will ever attain against the backdrop of boyhood dreams in the vast and unforgiving American West. I look forward to more great work from this talented writer. Well done!B. Linglehttp://www.blingle.infonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-57549859851762087642012-01-23T12:13:13.342-06:002012-01-23T12:13:13.342-06:00The energy lack, of which I have plenty, is what strikes me here--that and the question of moisture content. Always writers talk of a flow, starting it, maintaining it. Everything I&#39;ve written to this point has felt like squeezing out pellets. I think of my stones, and think (with apologies to Eliot) that I&#39;m a writer of that kidney.Buxton Wellshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01879229722240158360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-48338538230033987812012-01-23T11:23:42.748-06:002012-01-23T11:23:42.748-06:00Wonderful! I shall share far and wide. :-)BitterGracehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18262639525430954930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-75533116102072478552011-12-27T13:09:09.828-06:002011-12-27T13:09:09.828-06:00Keep up the good work.Erectile Dysfunctionhttp://prenos-transport.com/drugs/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-17769912868404078552011-12-16T05:15:04.553-06:002011-12-16T05:15:04.553-06:00Excellent story, Nathan. You&#39;ve come a long way since I last saw you (you were about three, I think). Flows beautifully and made me smile several times. Reading should be pleasurable and I certainly enjoyed this. (Phil Nemir forwarded it to me) Eric BellisEric Bellishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14904048322455454567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-60209965947691378662011-11-28T09:39:41.138-06:002011-11-28T09:39:41.138-06:00Very good writing. Good little story Fred.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-15365434894114089012011-10-28T19:52:09.223-05:002011-10-28T19:52:09.223-05:00Deeply enjoyed this thoughtful contribution on writing. I do think humble readers, however long they&#39;ve been at it, make the best writers.J. Spinazzolahttp://www.attheseries.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-57936628058183226682011-10-19T20:18:39.161-05:002011-10-19T20:18:39.161-05:00I try to read all his work, for Sci Fi fans he&#39;s also the author of The Acutator - attheseries.com. An interesting dystopian/young love novel not really my sort of thing but I loved it.jodi holidayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16456759190054881913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-55726158345318688802011-08-20T16:54:41.597-05:002011-08-20T16:54:41.597-05:00There is a road in the middle of nowhere on the border of Utah and Nevada that is turned red every year by the smashed Mormon cricket blood working its way into the grooves of the pavement. I thought it was made from red rock when i first drove the road, but when I stopped the vehicle, I could see the myriad crickets taking leaps to slowly get to the other side.boo2d2http://www.blogger.com/profile/05212645553534190307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-73426009466420968172011-08-04T14:23:50.239-05:002011-08-04T14:23:50.239-05:00Well, the 21-day heat wave in KC just broke so will send some dog days stuff straightaway.lou greeleynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-12450031809826920612011-05-23T20:45:50.648-05:002011-05-23T20:45:50.648-05:00Wise words indeed Mr. Weene. Enjoyed the interviewMonica Brinkmanhttp://www.monicabrinkmanbooks.webs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-17731952165357738692011-05-19T13:50:33.753-05:002011-05-19T13:50:33.753-05:00Wow, that is great! Well-written and riveting. I grew up with baseball and my 2 brothers and I used to bat rocks into the puget sound with sticks of driftwood.Sara Fletcherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07797499993684252603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-65970836711960696732011-05-18T21:40:13.090-05:002011-05-18T21:40:13.090-05:00Thank you for sharing. Good Story!<br />ValerieValerienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-23651829275613607752011-05-17T18:29:50.785-05:002011-05-17T18:29:50.785-05:00Cool story. The end sucker-punched me emotionally--didn&#39;t see that one coming. Lots of numbers, fitting for a story with a baseball theme. I particularly like the fact that the next number mentioned (13) after Fibonocci is the next number in the series, going forward (3,5,8,13.)Stevan Allrednoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-78016981340547913612011-05-17T17:18:04.269-05:002011-05-17T17:18:04.269-05:00Well done, Gail! I felt like I was out there with him, hitting rocks...Jennyjenniferhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00084812798152933395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-32788458157381202262011-05-17T14:44:39.653-05:002011-05-17T14:44:39.653-05:00I love it! I feel like I just read a really good 300 page novel!!<br /><br />Nancy Stambaughnancyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10633491403305978062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-52604016813041668172011-05-17T10:21:42.493-05:002011-05-17T10:21:42.493-05:00Poignant and smoothly on target with a final sentence that moves a grown man to sympathetic tears.George Ivan Smith editorhttp://www.alamedapdx.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-44072239126837135112011-04-15T11:23:01.977-05:002011-04-15T11:23:01.977-05:00Wow, really good story, i like the authors writing style. Just beautiful.Elizabethnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-37194196910761713012011-04-14T13:49:33.491-05:002011-04-14T13:49:33.491-05:00Great work keep it coming, best blog on earth<br /><br /><a href="http://consultantmediconline.com#944" rel="nofollow">generic nolvadex</a>cosisikhhttp://cosisikh.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-55957932871786606332011-04-11T19:52:28.091-05:002011-04-11T19:52:28.091-05:00What a nice story. It reminds me so much of childhood I got a little misty reading it. Great job Charlie. Write me another one.Barrynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-71117315968086934762011-04-11T16:03:50.320-05:002011-04-11T16:03:50.320-05:00Great Story!!!! Excellent job. Love your style.. very impressive. Keep up the good work!Cindyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07428452677778205283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-26434775330995655052011-04-10T18:50:38.403-05:002011-04-10T18:50:38.403-05:00Thanks for your share! very impressive!<br /><br /><a href="http://yourdoctorpharmacy.com/#946" rel="nofollow">clomid</a>woyujunehttp://woyujune.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5367013425327804750.post-15388874824054744992011-03-31T07:31:59.398-05:002011-03-31T07:31:59.398-05:00We revere strength (male) and marginalize vulnerability (female). There is wrong in each of us to a man, we atone. It is all we can do for now.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com